Title of Essay: Marathon Carnage: Explosions in Boston
1. http://nation.time.com/2013/04/15/boston-marathon-explosion-gallery/photo/warning-2/
2. The subject of my essay is what happened they exact moment the bombs went off in Boston during the marathon.
3. When i saw the title i knew i wanted to learn more about what had happened that day so i clicked on the link and the first picture i say was stating "before you look at the up coming pictures viewer discretion is advised." I was worried about what kind of pictures that were coming up but i went ahead and check out the article and it was horrible. The pictures left me feeling sad and scared for the people who got hurt during the bombing.
4. They photos were of people who got hurt by the bombing and people crying from the shock of the bombs going off. Most of the photos were people covered in blood and it was hear breaking to see. These pictures shows what innocent people had to went through.
5. There was about 3 to 4 sentences with the photos. The copy help explain what is going on and what is happening in the photos.
Very sad that happen in Boston! ):
ReplyDeleteSarah, your choices were very wisely chosen and explained. Be mindful of a few writing conventions: the pronoun "I" is always written with a capital letter; and grammar such as "there were". Good job overall.
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